Kimberly Waltz Gary-stu / Mary-sue

I saw Doing it so i wanted to try^^



This is just like one of those normal journal entry test where you put an x in the box near the question if it is true. remember, x = 1 point (or whatever amount of points it says that you must add). If your OC is a mary sue or gary stu, don't have some little hissy fit and point fingers at somebody but yourself. This test speaks the truth, and if you don't like the result, then I suggest you change some things about your OC. Have fun.

[-] They are possessed by an angel
[-] They are possessed by a demon
[-] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[x] They are physically strong (Not muscular but he's not a wimp)
[-] They have a rare hair/fur color (Just normal cat fur)
[x] Their eyes are an unusual color
[-] This unusual eye color happens to be red
[x] Their eyes change
[x] They have wings [Does not count for Pegasi]
[-] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[-] They are immortal [+10 points]
[ ] [if a female] they have large bra size [+5 points]
[-] [if a male] they are very muscular [+5 points]
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender [+5 points]
[-] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[x] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc [+5 points]
[-] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[x] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[-] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[-] They are a healer ( One of finest)
[-] They are from a very rich/royal family [+3 points]
[-] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[-] They have lost one/both of their parents
[-] They ran away from home
[x] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[-] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[x] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[-] They never knew their parents
[-] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[x] They are very attractive to the same gender
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends (no REAL friends and the truth reveals....)
[-] They are emo/cutesy
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are. [+5 points](she looks OLDER
[-] They are currently in a relationship
[-] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[x] They have a mental disorder
[x] They have an emotional disorder (you might not no but her parents where REALLY bad to her, and as a result she suffers from things like Migraine,Depression,ect, but they are minner most of the time)
[-] They struggle to stay sane
[-] They are a psycho
[-] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[-] They have hallucinations
[x] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[x] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet( two, bandit and flesh-eater^^..and yes she is re-thinking about that name)
[x] They have a guardian spirit ( its a L O N G strong..i'll just make a comic on iy:3)
[-] They have a 'special type' of soul
[-] Their soul is not the same as them
[-] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[x] Some part of their body glows (HAIRR, WINGS, AND SOMETIMES HER HALO^^)
[-] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[x] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth (her twin-brother called danny, only she dont know)
[-] They are connected with a certain element
[x] They are connected with a certain animal
[-] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[-] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga. [+5 points]
[-] They are hiding from someone/something
[x] They have a rare blood type
[x] They cry blood [+5 points] (O.o)  (her troll form does..urmm does that count O30?)
[-] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[-] They are from a different country from where they currently live
[x] They are very mysterious/dark (kim holds deep secrets....)
[x] They are very lively/happy {MOST OF THE TIME OKAY!? SHE AINT SOME SUPERNATURAL-FREAK!! she is normal too:3}
[-] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[x] They are very patient
[-] They are from a long line of kings/queens.
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[-] They have amnesia
[X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition (long strong.. she part birrddd)
[-] The have a curse upon them
[-] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[x] They are 'the chosen one [+5 points] (YUP,in another time...dimention...and space.. when i think about it too muck i get all soul searchy )
[-] They have insomnia
[-] They are an Alicorn [+50]

Overall points:

(34)

Point Reductions:

Take ONE point off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke [tobacco]
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs [Heroin, Cocaine, LSD, etc]
[x] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless

Total points:33

<5 -Anti-Sue
6-15 -Balanced Character
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
26< -Mary-Sue


FLUGGERRBLUUBBERRRR KIMBERLY'S A MARY-SUE XD